Thursday, March 19, 2015

ADD TO POEM IS A WEEKLY ACTIVITY FOR THE POETS WHO ARE ACTIVE ON THE POET'S OASIS.
HERE IS THE FIRST CHALLENGE, WHICH  RECEIVED QUITE A COLORFUL RESPONSE
CONTRIBUTORS:
BEKKIE SANCHEZ
SHEFALI ARORA
PATRICK B VINCE
IAN H
NIAMH SERENDIPITY
JO THOMAS
TONSCHER01


I REMEMBER THE DAY...

I remember the day
When you first came in my sight
An intoxicating smile
An aura so pleasant
You caught my eye 
And then my heart
 I remember the day
when everything changed
I wanted it badly
I longed for your touch
A night on the beach
A magic carpet ride!

I remember that day
And more about that night
Made love to you madly
I couldn't get enough
I’m smiling when I cry
It’s when my love did start
Made love to you madly
That night you made me realize
I remember the day was great!

I remember that day
We were so versatile
Your heart was in my reach
Missing it each time I tried
You gave me it as a present
And you mine in exchange
Giving you my heart gladly
It was such a surprise
As if guided by fate

I remember that day we cried
Happy tears of joy
Running down our faces
The ring was a symbol
Of a new beginning
The kiss of a promise or more
 I remember how I felt that day
The beauty before me
Radiant and gay
The future ahead unknown
But my heart skipping merely
Thinking of how we could play

I remember the day
Those flowers
You kissed my hand
Held my heart captive
Within your smile
I remember how we were
love as deep as your kisses
I felt the moment reached deep
As the deep blue sea

I remember the first time
we made love
The passion in your touch
Our bodies came together hard
Such sweet movements
Turning into muffled cries
 I remember the first time
The kiss of true love
So glad it did not end
A night of romance
Giving way to the passion
Of emotion made real

I remember the day
You said it was the wine
Though I knew better
I felt what is real
You are my darling
And will always be.
I remember the days
I remember the nights
Although you are gone
Your memories will never sublime!



1 comment:

  1. What a great idea and surprise! You must put this link in our list on the About This Community please? Holy cow put this address on your compilation post and let peeps know you have this for them to go see them on. If you want just post them on here and post the link so they have to do comments here. You are awesome! I think you are learning did you see the blog I did of my Show Offs writer's?

    This turned out great!

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