ADD TO POEM IS A WEEKLY ACTIVITY FOR THE POETS WHO ARE ACTIVE ON THE POET'S OASIS.
HERE IS THE FIRST CHALLENGE, WHICH RECEIVED QUITE A COLORFUL RESPONSE
CONTRIBUTORS:
BEKKIE SANCHEZ
SHEFALI ARORA
PATRICK B VINCE
IAN H
NIAMH SERENDIPITY
JO THOMAS
TONSCHER01
I REMEMBER THE DAY...
I remember the day
When you first came in my sight
An intoxicating smile
An aura so pleasant
You caught my eye
And then my heart
When you first came in my sight
An intoxicating smile
An aura so pleasant
You caught my eye
And then my heart
I remember the day
when everything changed
I wanted it badly
I longed for your touch
A night on the beach
A magic carpet ride!
I remember that day
And more about that night
Made love to you madly
I couldn't get enough
I’m smiling when I cry
It’s when my love did start
Made love to you madly
That night you made me realize
I remember the day was great!
I remember
that day
We were so
versatile
Your heart
was in my reach
Missing it
each time I tried
You gave me
it as a present
And you
mine in exchange
Giving you
my heart gladly
It was such
a surprise
As if
guided by fate
I remember
that day we cried
Happy tears
of joy
Running down
our faces
The ring
was a symbol
Of a new
beginning
The kiss of
a promise or more
I remember
how I felt that day
The beauty
before me
Radiant and
gay
The future
ahead unknown
But my
heart skipping merely
Thinking of
how we could play
I remember the day
Those flowers
You kissed my hand
Held my heart captive
Within your smile
I
remember how we were
love
as deep as your kisses
I felt
the moment reached deep
As the
deep blue sea
I
remember the first time
we
made love
The
passion in your touch
Our
bodies came together hard
Such
sweet movements
Turning
into muffled cries
I remember
the first time
The
kiss of true love
So
glad it did not end
A
night of romance
Giving
way to the passion
Of
emotion made real
I
remember the day
You
said it was the wine
Though
I knew better
I felt
what is real
You
are my darling
And
will always be.
I
remember the days
I
remember the nights
Although
you are gone
Your
memories will never sublime!
What a great idea and surprise! You must put this link in our list on the About This Community please? Holy cow put this address on your compilation post and let peeps know you have this for them to go see them on. If you want just post them on here and post the link so they have to do comments here. You are awesome! I think you are learning did you see the blog I did of my Show Offs writer's?
ReplyDeleteThis turned out great!